Approaching the end of my WIP, I was very dissatisfied with
with the ending and decided my issue was chapters back (read half the book). I went back seven chapters (25,000
words) and started rewriting, changing the plot, and abandoning the majority of
the work I’d already done. This has been
particularly hard, but just as the beginnings of books are important to sell
the story to your reader, the ending is equally important to sell your next book.
Oddly enough, my writing issues seemed to line up with my
recent reads. The last two books I've read both had some ending issues, both for different
reason.
The first book was Married With Zombies by Jesse Peterson.
I’m quite the connoisseur of zombie media, and Married With Zombies is written as a ZomRomCom in
the manner of Shaun of the Dead or Zombieland. It’s cheeky and fun, but with plenty of gruesome,
violent details that make the zombie genre fun.
The main
characters, Sarah and David, a married couple with serious relationship
problems, find themselves at the epicenter of the start of a zombie apocalypse.
One of the things I found charming about
Peterson’s book was the start of the book.
Sarah and David are on the way to their weekly marriage counseling
appointment, both contemplating the possibility of divorce when they encounter
their therapist eating the couple that had the appointment before them (a fact
that’s especially rewarding since the couple with the appointment before them
are annoyingly perfect).
photo by Hang_in_there
At the beginning we find our couple fight zombies and each other, but as the book progresses they come to appreciate each other more and rekindle the love they once shared. The book is written with humorous chapter titles straight out of relationship guides, but with a zombie twist. Practical advice such as: Build mutual friendships. Just be ready to end them when your friends start trying to eat you.
I really enjoyed
the book and look forward to reading the others in the series. I was with
Peterson every step of the way, until the ending. The ending was more of a non-ending.
There’s a dramatic arch and a conclusion to their primary goal (getting out of
town and finding David’s sister), but after that it wide open.
I understand the
reasoning…This book was written as a series, and the ending leaves things wide
open. There was very little explanation about how the outbreak occurred, but enough
to know that it spread fast (toppling major West Coast cities within three
days). We are left with the idea that more rural areas of the country would be
safer, and that’s where our couple head off…riding into the sun set (well maybe
sunrise since they are heading East), but not before setting up a humorous and yes, gimmicky plan that sets up the next few books.
But my preference
for solid endings had me screaming. I
wished the author would have had the couple settle down with a “now that we
were safe” type ending, but instead we’re left with the “tune in next time and
see what happens when this zany couple hits the Midwest”.
Don’t get me wrong.
I liked the book and will definitely get the next one. It was campy and fun, and while very predictable
it was nice to see the zombie apocalypse happen around a married couple with
common problems. Just because zombies are trying to eat you doesn’t mean that
all your relationship problems are going to disappear.
I highly recommend
this book, especially if enjoy campy humor along with your blood and gore.
Next up will be of Monster by A. Lee Martinez.
Next up will be of Monster by A. Lee Martinez.
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